What are the things you\'ve realized throughout this pandemic?
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I\'ve realized above all, desease is the most scariest thing in the world.
I thought it could possibly used for a war instead of weapon.
For example, it is invisible so whoever wants to kill the targeted person could infect that person to murder and nobody knows who is the criminal. Like in a movie!
Also, I wondered whether the zombie virus can really happen. Well, I hope not..
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I thought it could possibly used for a war instead of weapon.
For example, it is invisible so whoever wants to kill the targeted person could infect that person to murder and nobody knows who is the criminal. Like in a movie!
Also, I wondered whether the zombie virus can really happen. Well, I hope not.
I\'ve realized above all, desease is the most scariest thing in the world.
>> I\'ve realize above all is that disease is one of the scariest things in the world.
I thought it could possibly used for a war instead of weapon.
>> I thought that it can actually be used in wars instead of weapons.
For example, it is invisible so whoever wants to kill the targeted person could infect that person to murder and nobody knows who is the criminal. Like in a movie!
>> For example, since viruses are invisible to the naked eye, you can use that to murder people without letting them know who\'s responsible for it just like in the movies.
Also, I wondered whether the zombie virus can really happen. Well, I hope not.
>> I also wonder if a zombie apocalypse can really happen in the future. Well, I hope not.
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