What are the things you want to achieve before the end of this year?
학생이 쓴 원문
What are the things you want to achieve before the end of this year?
A: I don’t know what am I gonna doing before end of this year. but I want start English study and find out what ever I want for future.
especially English speaking skill is very important to me for my future. so I have to study to English .but it is so hard and bother me it means little bit difficult to me.
anyway, and I have to figure out my wish-list to next year.
and now I started English free-Talking study, this is a achieve before end of yrear a little bit.!
강사 첨삭
Hello, Hari!
I was surprised when I got your composition this quickly! Thank you for making the time to write down your thoughts and send me. ^__^ Let\'s make the remaining days of this year productive. Fighting!!! ^__^
-Chammy
A: I don’t know what am I gonna doing before end of this year. but I want start English study and find out what ever I want for future.
>>I don’t know what am I gonna do before the end of this year. But I want to start English study and find out whatever I want for the future.
OR
>>I\'m not sure what I\'m going to do before the end of the year. But I want to start studying English and figure out what I want to do in the future.
especially English speaking skill is very important to me for my future. so I have to study to English .but it is so hard and bother me it means little bit difficult to me.
>>Especially English speaking skills are very important for my future. So, I have to study it but it is so hard and bothers me. It means a little bit difficult to me.
OR
>> Especially English speaking skills are very important for my future. So, I have to study it. But, it bothers me a lot and makes it seem a little challenging.
anyway, and I have to figure out my wish-list to next year.
>>Anyway, I also have to figure out my wish list for next year
and now I started English free-Talking study, this is a achieve before end of yrear a little bit.!
>>And now I started English free-talking study, This is a little achievement before the end of this year.
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