What are the things you want your city to have?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am living in a new and small city of Korea.
The city is newly developed so infrastructures are not enough to be able to live comfortably.
There are no enough transportation and convenient facilities.
While some parts of the city where has been developed at first have many things to enjoy, eat, visit etc, the other parts are suffering from lack of transportation and cinema, also from vacant apartments, which might be speculated but nobody live there.
The city is a speculation-ridden areas.
I hope that the city needs more places in order to enjoy culture lives such as a cinema and theater, opera house etc.
Also, the public transportation has to be developed much more to reduce the commuter time or transit time.
It is really difficult to survive here without your own car.
I think the main problem of the city is ‘transportation’ and ‘cultural places’ so far.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Good evening and thank you for submitting your thoughts about the homework I sent.
I hope that the issues you mentioned will be resolved soon so that you will be able to enjoy staying in your city more. ^^
Anyway, thank you again and have a wonderful night. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
The city is newly developed so infrastructures are not enough to be able to live comfortably.
The city is newly developed so infrastructures are not enough to be able to live comfortably.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: The city is a newly developed area that\'s why there are less infrastructures and they are not enough for us to live comfortably.
There are no enough transportation and convenient facilities.
There are no enough transportation and convenient facilities.
>> CORRECT.
While some parts of the city where has been developed at first have many things to enjoy, eat, visit etc, the other parts are suffering from lack of transportation and cinema, also from vacant apartments, which might be speculated but nobody live there.
While some parts of the city where has been developed at first have many things to enjoy, eat, visit etc, the other parts are suffering from lack of transportation and cinema, also from vacant apartments, which might be speculated but nobody live there.
>> While some parts of the city have been developed where you can enjoy many things like eating, visiting, etc., there are other parts that are suffering from the lack of transportation and cinema. There are also some vacant apartments, which might be speculated but nobody live there,
The city is a speculation-ridden areas.
>> The city is a speculation-ridden area.
>> The city is a speculation-ridden area.
I hope that the city needs more places in order to enjoy culture lives such as a cinema and theater, opera house etc.
>> I hope that the city will have more places to go in order to enjoy the culture of people such as going to a cinema, theater, opera house, etc.
Also, the public transportation has to be developed much more to reduce the commuter time or transit time.
Also, the public transportation has to be developed much more to reduce the commuter time or transit time.
>> CORRECT.
It is really difficult to survive here without your own car.
It is really difficult to survive here without your own car.
>> CORRECT.
I think the main problem of the city is ‘transportation’ and ‘cultural places’ so far.
I think the main problem of the city is ‘transportation’ and ‘cultural places’ so far.
Thank you.
>> CORRECT.
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