What are the three (3) things you would like to accomplish/have before and after you retire?
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I totally agree with your ideas. Life is really tough.
As early as now, we should find ways to invest and have business.
We are not sure what will happen in the future.
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Teacher Nina
The first question I should ask myself is when I am going to retire.
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Do I have a retirement plan?
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Actually I have not made a retirement plan yet.
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I am not sure until when I can work.
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Although 60 is an official retirement age by most companies in Korea, employees are forced to leave much earlier than that.
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So considering the reality, mid 50 might be the time when I have to leave my company.
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After that, could I be employed by another company?
>> After that, could I be employed in another company?
>> OR: After that, could I get a job in a different company?
Not sure.
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>> OR: It is not sure.
If not, what should I do?
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Because my kid is still young and I do not have other sources of incomes or deposits, I have to work at least until 65.
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Then, do I have to run my own business?
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The probability of success in running my own business is extremely low.
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Seniors who already retired said that only one of ten people succeed when they are self-employed.
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Life is tough.
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Even after you work for 25 or 30 years, you and your family are not afford to have a decent life due to not enough pension and social benefit programs.
>> Even after you work for 25 or 30 years, you and your family can\'t afford to have a decent life due to not enough pension and social benefit programs.
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