What are the three adjectives that best describe you as a son/daughter. Kindly answer in not more th
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m intimate and close daughter.
My parents and I cannot meet each other very often, but we contact everyday with SNS.
My mother and father send me photos to let me know their schedules.
And I\'m very special daughter to them.
They love me very much and express their love to me every time.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Sue!
(^___^)//
Intimate and close mean the same so it\'ll be redundant.
I made some modifications, but you can ask me in class if you have things to clarify.
See you then.^^ Have a good day!
__Teacher Mayleen :)
I\'m intimate and close daughter.
>>> I\'m a sweet and loving daughter.
My parents and I cannot meet each other very often, but we contact everyday with SNS.
My parents and I cannot meet each other very often, but we contact everyday with SNS.
>>> My parents and I cannot meet each other very often, but we communicate everyday through SNS.
My mother and father send me photos to let me know their schedules.
My mother and father send me photos to let me know their schedules.
>>> My mother and father send me photos to let me know their schedule.
>>> OR: My mother and father send me photos to let me know what they\'re up to.
And I\'m very special daughter to them.
And I\'m very special daughter to them.
>>> That\'s because I\'m very special to them.
They love me very much and express their love to me every time.
They love me very much and express their love to me every time.
>>> They love me very much and they express their love to me every time.
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