What are the three most important things for you to be happy?
학생이 쓴 원문
They are my family, friends, and exercising.
First, I need my family because I need to be comfortable with my family, and I don\'t want to be lonely.
Second, I need my friends to hang out with to be happy.
And for the last, I need exercising because I love to exercise.
Because of these reasons, my family, friends and exercising are the most important things for my happiness.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thanks for being consistent with your writing. See you tomorrow! ^^
~`Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
First, I need my family because I need to be comfortable with my family, and I don\'t want to be lonely.
First, I need my family because I need to be comfortable with my family, and I don\'t want to be lonely.
>>First, I need my family because I am comfortable with them, and I don\'t want to be lonely.
Second, I need my friends to hang out with to be happy.
Second, I need my friends to hang out with to be happy.
>>CORRECT!
And for the last, I need exercising because I love to exercise.
And for the last, I need exercising because I love to exercise.
>>And lastly, I need exercising because I love to exercise.
Because of these reasons, my family, friends and exercising are the most important things for my happiness.
Because of these reasons, my family, friends and exercising are the most important things for my happiness.
>>CORRECT!
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