What are the three most important things for you to be happy?
학생이 쓴 원문
The three most important things for my happiness are husband, Arashi and tasty food. I become happy when I just think about my husband. We have been married for 7years, my husband is so much lovely person to me. Arashi makes me happy too. Especially Matsumoto Jun is too perfect, so I consider he is not real. Yesterday I went to concert in Sapporo. My seat was very good, so I could see Arashi very close. It was the happiest time in this year. The third is tasty food. My favorite thing is French course. When I eat French course, I can enjoy various cuisine, from bread to dessert. Actually, French course in Hokkaido is very delicious. Hokkaido has fresh ingredients and chiefs make creative cuisine using these ingredients. When I am blue, I eat these things and restore my energy.
강사 첨삭
Hello Saki-San! :)
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
The three most important things for my happiness are husband, Arashi and tasty food.
>> The three things that make me happy the most are my husband, Arashi and tasty foods.
I become happy when I just think about my husband.
>> I feel happy just thinking about my husband.
We have been married for 7years, my husband is so much lovely person to me.
>> We have been married for 7 years and my husband is the loveliest person for me.
Arashi makes me happy too.
>> CORRECT!
Especially Matsumoto Jun is too perfect, so I consider he is not real.
>> Especially Matsumoto Jun, he is too perfect and sometimes I think he is too good to be true.
Yesterday I went to concert in Sapporo.
>> Yesterday, I went to a concert in Sapporo.
My seat was very good, so I could see Arashi very close.
>> My seat was very good, I was able to see Arashi very close.
It was the happiest time in this year.
>> It was the happiest time of this year.
The third is tasty food. My favorite thing is French course.
>> The third is tasty foods. My favorite is a French course.
When I eat French course, I can enjoy various cuisine, from bread to dessert.
>> When I eat a French course, I can enjoy various cuisines from bread to dessert.
Actually, French course in Hokkaido is very delicious.
>> Actually, the French course in Hokkaido is very delicious.
Hokkaido has fresh ingredients and chiefs make creative cuisine using these ingredients.
>> Hokkaido has a lot of fresh ingredients and the chiefs make creative cuisines using these ingredients.
When I am blue, I eat these things and restore my energy.
>> When I feel blue, I eat these foods and they restore my energy.
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