What are the times of the year that you give gifts?

2018-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

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I think the time I get a gift in a year is probably a special day or a good day for me. For example, receiving birthday presents on my birthday, Christmas, or Children's Day seems really just like that. So I'm going to talk about some typical times of the year when I get a gift. First, a gift from a girl friend or boyfriend! For example, the 100th or the 1st or 10th anniversary can be various. Also, there are many chocolate days! How about giving it to a lover on such a day or a person who likes a delicious chocolate with his own heart? Second, it is a gift from my parents. Suddenly, I got a gift for games like "Overwatch" and "Battleground" that I usually wanted! How do you feel? Although I can do it in PC room, it is really a good way to pay at once because it is a little annoying. So, I like to send and receive gifts on my own, but I think it is more memorable to send and receive letters and thoughts.

강사 첨삭

I think the time I get a gift in a year is probably a special day or a good day for me. For example, receiving birthday presents on my birthday, Christmas, or Children\'s Day seems really just like that. So I\'m going to talk about some typical times of the year when I get a gift.

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First, a gift from a girl friend or boyfriend! For example, the 100th or the 1st or 10th anniversary can be various. Also, there are many chocolate days! How about giving it to a lover on such a day or a person who likes a delicious chocolate with his own heart?

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Second, it is a gift from my parents. Suddenly, I got a gift for games like \"Overwatch\" and \"Battleground\" that I usually wanted! How do you feel? Although I can do it in PC room, it is really a good way to pay at once because it is a little annoying.

>>CORRECT

So, I like to send and receive gifts on my own, but I think it is more memorable to send and receive letters and thoughts.

>>CORRECT

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