What are the times of the year that you give gifts in Korea
학생이 쓴 원문
in Korea, we have big two holidays like thanksgiving day. both are traditional holidays. one is called sulnal , which is biggest one, at that day, the whole of family get together for celebrating our new year and wish that everything of this year will be nice. another seems to be liked thanksgiving day, which is thankful for harvest and food
강사 첨삭
in Korea, we have big two holidays like thanksgiving day. both are traditional holidays. one is called sulnal , which is biggest one, at that day, the whole of family get together for celebrating our new year and wish that everything of this year will be nice. another seems to be liked thanksgiving day, which is thankful for harvest and food
>> In Korea, we have two big holidays like thanksgiving day. Both are traditional holidays. One is called Sulnal, which is the biggest holiday. On that day, the whole family gets together to celebrate new year and wish that everything this year will be nice. The other holiday is similar to thanksgiving day, but in this case, people celebrate their thanks for a good harvest and food.
>> In Korea, we have two big holidays like thanksgiving day. Both are traditional holidays. One is called Sulnal, which is the biggest holiday. On that day, the whole family gets together to celebrate new year and wish that everything this year will be nice. The other holiday is similar to thanksgiving day, but in this case, people celebrate their thanks for a good harvest and food.
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