What are the top two things you can\'t do without any help?
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The top two things you can\'t do without any help First, swimming because children is very hard.
Second, going to the another country because airplane is very expensive.
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What are the top two things you can\'t do without any help?
The top two things you can\'t do without any help First, swimming because children is very hard.
>>> The top two things I can\'t do without any help are the following: First, swimming because it\'s very hard for children to do it without any help.
Second, going to the another country because airplane is very expensive.
>>> Second, going to another country because air tickets are very expensive.
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