What are the toughest jobs in the world?
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Hmmmmmm... as I see it, there are dangerous jobs a lot. I just come to mind about a coal worker. You know? my parents generation used to work abroad as coal worker or nurse in Germany in 1970. At that time, that was a moment when it\'s the poverty period due to Korean war. They don\'t want to turn over the poor things to their child. Even while they did. So, I heard about it from my parents.
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Hmmmmmm... as I see it, there are dangerous jobs a lot.
>> Hmmmmmm... as I see it, there are a lot of dangerous jobs
I just come to mind about a coal worker.
>> CORRECT!You know? my parents generation used to work abroad as coal worker or nurse in Germany in 1970.
>> You know, in my parents\' generation, people used to work abroad as coal workers or nurses in Germany in 1970.
At that time, that was a moment when it\'s the poverty period due to Korean war.
>> At that time, that was a moment when it\'s the poverty period due to the Korean war.
They don\'t want to turn over the poor things to their child.
>> CORRECT!Even while they did.
>> CORRECT!So, I heard about it from my parents.
>> CORRECT!
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