What are the traditional things that Koreans do during Chu Seok?
학생이 쓴 원문
We can do ganggangsulae, traditional Korean circle dance play. And we usually make and eat songpyeon, half-moon-shaped rice cake. Moreover we We visit our ancestors\' graves and do ancestral rites.
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Koreans celebrate Chu Seok by making special foods, particularly a certain kind of rice cake called songpyeon. Songpyeon is made with finely ground new rice and the dough is kneaded into small round shapes and filled with sesame seeds, chestnuts, red beans, or other similar ingredients.
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We can do ganggangsulae, traditional Korean circle dance play.
>> We do Ganggangsulae, a traditional Korean circle dance play.
And we usually make and eat songpyeon, half-moon-shaped rice cake.
>> And we usually make and eat songpyeon, those are half-moon-shaped rice cake.
Moreover we We visit our ancestors\' graves and do ancestral rites.
>> Moreover, we visit our ancestors\' graves and do ancestral rites.
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