What are the traits that someone has to possess to be an efficient worker
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To be an efficient worker, there are many traits one should possess.
The time management is one of them because he/she is always pressed for time and he/she needs to complete the tasks within a given time. It is also one of key elements for him//herself to hold himself/herself accountable for an assignment he/she has completed.
Lastly problem solving skill cannot be too empasized. In a day to day business environments, we have to deal with various kinds of problems and we should have knowledge, skills, and ability to define the root cause of the problem, analyze and seek a solution to the issue.
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Hope everything is well as you start your year. I\'m glad to see that you were able to express yourself in this composition. I hope you\'ll send me more of these in our classes ahead. I enjoyed reading them! I placed corrections on each sentences. Please go over them if you have time for your improvement. Talk to you soon.
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Here are mt corrections for you:
To be an efficient worker, there are many traits one should possess. >> CorrectThe time management is one of them because he/she is always pressed for time and he/she needs to
complete the tasks within a given time.
>> Correct
>> Time management is one of the best traits because he/she is always pressured with time and he/she needs to complete the tasks within a given time.
It is also one of key elements for him//herself to hold himself/herself accountable for an assignment he/she has completed. >> It is also one of the key elements for him//herself to hold himself/herself accountable for any assignment he/she has completed.
Lastly problem solving skill cannot be too empasized.
>> Correct
In a day to day business environments, we have to deal with various kinds of problems and we should have knowledge, skills, and ability to define the root cause of the problem, analyze and seek a solution to the issue.
>> Correct (Well said^^)
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