What are the uses of your important gadget?
학생이 쓴 원문
umm.. my important gadget is must be a smartphone. you know. smartphone never makes me bored. and also useful. we can do everything we want with smartphone. for example in my case i always watching youtube and netflix before i fall a sleep. and also we can communicate with friends using kakao talk or something like insta and facebook. i think smartphone is very essential item these days
강사 첨삭
Hello Robin!
Your answer is good, but better memorize the suggested patterns so you will sound like a native speaker. Remember to start with simple sentences then improve with longer ones. You can do it! ^^
~T. Maine
>>My most important gadget is a must which is the smartphone.
you know. smartphone never makes me bored. and also useful.
>>You know, the smartphone never makes me bored and it is also useful.
we can do everything we want with smartphone.
>> We can do everything we want with it.
for example in my case i always watching youtube and netflix before i fall a sleep.
>> For example in my case, I always watch YouTube and Netflix before going to bed.
and also we can communicate with friends using kakao talk or something like insta and facebook.
>> And also, we can communicate with friends using messenger apps such as Kakaotalk, Instagram, and Facebook.
i think smartphone is very essential item these days
>> I think the smartphone is a very essential item these days. We could never live without it.
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