What are the usual consequences of being tardy or absent?

2024-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Trixia

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When I was a student, teachers gave punishment to students who was late school. Some students didn\'t enter school through a gate. They crossed wall for avoiding teachers. The punishment was that clearning toilet for 1 week, running 0 laps of the playground. My middle school and high school were far from home. It took 1 hour by buses. It was snowy day, I was late for school. But I didn\'t get punishment because the weather was a legitimate reason.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]ny!
Wow. That\'s a scary punishment. ^^ However, teaching students not to be late is a must, for them to learn how to be responsible and punctual.
~ Trixia

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When I was a student, teachers gave punishment to students who was late school.

- When I was a student, teachers gave punishment to students who were late to school.

Some students didn\'t enter school through a gate.

- CORRECT.

They crossed wall for avoiding teachers.

- They crossed the wall to avoid teachers.

The punishment was that clearning toilet for 1 week, running 0 laps of the playground.

- The punishment was learning to use the toilet for 1 week and running 0 laps of the playground.

My middle school and high school were far from home.

- CORRECT.

It took 1 hour by buses.

- It took an hour by bus.

It was snowy day, I was late for school. But I didn\'t get punishment because the weather was a legitimate reason.

- It was a snowy day, and I was late for school, but I didn\'t get punished because the weather was a legitimate reason.

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