What are the usual reasons why teens stay out late in Korea?

2019-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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In Korea, there are many fun things and activities such as game rooms, and rooms for singing songs during 24 hours. Most of young people like to enjoy them and fill their empty stomach with plenty of foods at convenient stores around them. That’s the reason why teens want to stay out.

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1. In Korea, there are many fun things and activities such as game rooms, and rooms for singing songs during 24 hours.

>>In Korea, there are many fun things and activities such as game rooms, and rooms for singing songs that open for 24 hours.

2. Most of young people like to enjoy them and fill their empty stomach with plenty of foods at convenient stores around them. That’s the reason why teens want to stay out.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: Most young people enjoy time outside by eating at convenience stores in their area. Those are the main reasons why young people like staying out late.

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