What are the ways to prevent health problems?

2022-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I think that there are prevent health problems two ways. First one is eating good food like a vegetable, good meat etc. It is bad to our body to eating junk food. And second one is doing exercise. These are not a new solution. But eating food and doing exercise is everything of health.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I think that there are prevent health problems two ways.

>> I think that you can prevent health problems in two ways.
First one is eating good food like a vegetable, good meat etc.

>> First one is eating good food like vegetables and good meat.
It is bad to our body to eating junk food.
>> It is bad for our body to eat junk food.
And second one is doing exercise.
>> Second one is doing exercise.
These are not a new solution.

>> These are not new solutions.
But eating food and doing exercise is everything of health.

>> But eating healthy food and exercising is good for the health.

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