What are the worst things about being a child?

2016-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

Although there are favorable things that can make you happy if you become a child again, there are a lot of downsides as well. You won’t be able to drink, take a trip alone, or drive. Above all, you need to wait for almost 10 years to be autonomous and independent. There are not many things you can do by yourself. I still remember that when I got a driver’s license for the first time, I was so delighted. Getting a driver’s license means a lot to you because you can now drink and go to a bar legally. Being under a custody of your parents is somewhat the safest and the most comfortable way to live, however, your autonomy will be restricted. If I can go back to the past, I want to be in my 20’s like college days, which I think was my golden times. Around 20 is not too young, neither too old. You can re-design and restart your life. You are just a white paper. You can draw anything in the paper as you wish. You can try whatever you want because there are plenty of opportunities.

강사 첨삭

T..G.I.F. Sir [이름]!

I hope you enjoyed your childhood years.

In my case, I was really busy.

Like what I told you in our previous classes, I took piano lessons, ballet class and studied on weekends.

There were times that I had the chance to play but it was with my cousins.

So my close friends are also my cousins.

You are right. You are the one who is responsible for your life.
Like what you always tell me, we should live our life to the fullest.

See you.
Teacher Nina


Although there are favorable things that can make you happy if you become a child again, there are a lot of downsides as well.

>> correct

You won’t be able to drink, take a trip alone, or drive.

>> correct

Above all, you need to wait for almost 10 years to be autonomous and independent.

>> correct

There are not many things you can do by yourself.

>> correct

I still remember that when I got a driver’s license for the first time, I was so delighted.

>> correct

Getting a driver’s license means a lot to you because you can now drink and go to a bar legally.

>> correct

Being under a custody of your parents is somewhat the safest and the most comfortable way to live, however, your autonomy will be restricted.

>> correct

If I can go back to the past, I want to be in my 20’s like college days, which I think was my golden times.

>> correct

Around 20 is not too young, neither too old.

>> correct

You can re-design and restart your life.

>> correct

You are just a white paper.

>> correct

You can draw anything in the paper as you wish.

>> correct

You can try whatever you want because there are plenty of opportunities.

>> correct

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