What are thie things you should consider when planning an event?
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I usually consider the taste of someone who will get the event, so I tend to prepare customized something.
To be specific, when I planed my friend’s birthday party before, I customized her cake which was made of her taste. And Her name and her nick-name were written on the cake. Also I made an order customized gift, like a cosmetic case with her name and phone number. It’s simple but very unique. She can’t find the same thing anywhere and even if she lose that, she is able to find it easily !
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Hi Elena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
I usually consider the taste of someone who will get the event, so I tend to prepare customized something.
>> I usually consider the taste of someone who will get the event, so I tend to prepare customized items.
To be specific, when I planed my friend’s birthday party before, I customized her cake which was made of her taste.
>> To be specific, when I planned my friend’s birthday party before, I customized her cake which was of her taste.
OR >> >> To be specific, when I planned my friend’s birthday party before, I customized her cake which was according to her taste.
And Her name and her nick-name were written on the cake.
>> And, her name and nickname were written on the cake.
lso I made an order customized gift, like a cosmetic case with her name and phone number.
>> So I ordered a customized gift, like a cosmetic case with her name and phone number.
It’s simple but very unique.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It\'s simple, but special.
She can’t find the same thing anywhere and even if she lose that, she is able to find it easily!
>> CORRECT!
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