What are three smartphone apps that you can\'t live withou? Explain why
학생이 쓴 원문
There are three smartphone apps that I like.
They are Tidal, Instagram & Neflix.
Tidal is paid music app which provide the high quality of sounds like that of CD.
Instagram is social networking app that I can share my life with my friends thru photos or videos.
Neflix is movie app which has a variety of movies from all over the world.
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There are three smartphone apps that I like.
>> There are three smartphone apps that I like.
They are Tidal, Instagram & Neflix.
They are Tidal, Instagram & Neflix.
>> They are Tidal, Instagram & Netflix.
Tidal is paid music app which provide the high quality of sounds like that of CD.
Tidal is paid music app which provide the high quality of sounds like that of CD.
>> Tidal is a paid music app which provides high quality sounds similar to those of CDs.
Instagram is social networking app that I can share my life with my friends thru photos or videos.
Instagram is social networking app that I can share my life with my friends thru photos or videos.
>> Instagram is a social networking app where I can share my life with my friends thru photos or videos.
Neflix is movie app which has a variety of movies from all over the world.
Neflix is movie app which has a variety of movies from all over the world.
>> Netflix is a movie app which shows a variety of movies from all over the world.
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