What are three things that motivate you?
학생이 쓴 원문
The thought like \'I want to be like that person.\' motivates me. And the person who I think I want to be like him or her, he or she has some good points. Also, when I think something is serious problem to me, it motivates me to fix that problem. Last, presents for me motivate me to do something more hard.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Nick! ^^
It\'s so great to know about what motivates you.
It\'s so great to know about what motivates you.
Thank you for sharing these with me. ^^
Please check the corrections~
Have a good night!
- T. Rina
1. The thought like \'I want to be like that person.\' motivates me.
>> CORRECT!
2. And the person who I think I want to be like him or her, he or she has some good points.
>> And the person who I think I want to be like has some good points.
3. Also, when I think something is serious problem to me, it motivates me to fix that problem.
>> Also, when I have a serious problem, it motivates me to fix it.
OR: Having a serious problem motivates me because I know that I have to fix it.
4. Last, presents for me motivate me to do something more hard.
>> Lastly, receiving presents motivate me to do something harder and better.
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