What are three things that you are grateful for today?(ANSWER)

2019-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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1. A successful English musical Our class's English musical was great! But we don't get a prize.. 2. feeling better I was sick at Christmas, but I feel good today! My health is getting better 3. Good time with my friends I played with my friends after the musical. It was great!!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

What are three things that you are grateful for today?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

1.    A successful English musical
Our class\'s English musical was great!
But we don\'t get a prize..

2. feeling better
I was sick at Christmas, but I feel good today!

     My health is getting better

    3. Good time with my friends
    I played with my friends after the musical.
    It was great!!

 

 

CORRECTIONS:

 

1.    A successful English musical
Our class\'s English musical was great!
But we don\'t get a prize
.

2.
Feeling better
I was sick at Christmas, but I feel good today!

   My health is getting better.

 

 

3. Good time with my friends
I played with my friends after the musical.
It was great!!

.

 


** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 And, well done!! You only have few mistakes. ^^ Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

 

               

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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