What are three things you like about yourself?
학생이 쓴 원문
First, My height is 182 centimeters. I am taller than average, and I look younger than my age.
Second, I am living a regular life. I don\'t enjoy drinking alcohol. I can keep my routine. It means that I spend time with my family after work.
Third, I have tried to follow the rule. So, I have open heard from my colleagues that I am the person who can rely on.
강사 첨삭
Happy Wednesday, [이름]ny!^^
For our general happiness and well-being, self-love is essential. Appreciating and accepting oneself, flaws and all, is the essence of self-love.
Anxiety and despair are less common in those who love who they are. Additionally, developing self-love lowers stress, decreases procrastination, and improves concentration at work.
Thank you so much for this composition. Have a good night!
__T. Mayleen :)
>>> First, my height is 182 centimeters. I am taller than average, and I look younger than my age.
Second, I am living a regular life. I don\'t enjoy drinking alcohol. I can keep my routine. It means that I spend time with my family after work.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: Second, I live a normal life. I do not like drinking alcohol. I can keep up my schedule. That means I spend time with my family after work.
Third, I have tried to follow the rule. So, I have open heard from my colleagues that I am the person who can rely on.
>>> Third, I have tried to follow the rule. So, I have openly heard from my colleagues that I am the person they can rely on.
>>> OR: Third, I always try to obey the rule. So I\'ve been told frankly by my coworkers that I\'m the person they can rely on.
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