What are you eating nowadays?
학생이 쓴 원문
Nowadays I try do on a diet for my health.
I have to lose weight over 5 kg because If I gain weight it increases the probability of getting cancer again.
I try to switch processed foods and bread to natural foods.
I am having some tomato, vegetable and boiled eggs at every meal.
I also make my own salad dressing with olive oil and garlic.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you so much for today\'s ideas.
Have a nice morning and talk to you later!
Teacher ELLY.
What are you eating nowadays?
Nowadays I try do on a diet for my health.
>>Nowadays, I am trying to go on a diet for my health.
I have to lose weight over 5 kg because If I gain weight it increases the probability of getting cancer again.
I have to lose weight over 5 kg because If I gain weight it increases the probability of getting cancer again.
>>I have to lose over 5 kilograms, because If I gain weight, it increases the probability of getting cancer again.
I try to switch processed foods and bread to natural foods.
>>I try to switch from processed foods and bread to natural foods.
>>I have some tomatoes, vegetables and boiled eggs on every meal.
I also make my own salad dressing with olive oil and garlic.
I also make my own salad dressing with olive oil and garlic.
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or>>I also concoct my own salad dressing by using some olive oil and garlic.
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