What are you enjoy doing when I was your age?

2018-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

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I don't want to go back that time. there was a fear of uncertain future. I got married when I was in fourth grade in University.(at the age of 23) I was too young and I didn't know anything. When I was your age. I was busing taking care of my babies. I didn't have good memories because I was too hard Baby-sitting is hard work. Thank you for adding more for me. I wanted you to have rest.

강사 첨삭

I don\'t want to go back that time.

>> I don\'t want to go back to that time.

there was a fear of uncertain future.

>> there was a fear of the uncertain future.

I got married when I was in fourth grade in University.(at the age of 23)

>> I got married when I was in fourth grade in the University

I was too young and I didn\'t know anything.

>> CORRECT.

When I was your age. I was busing taking care of my babies.

>> When I was your age, I was busy taking care of my babies.

I didn\'t have good memories because I was too hard

>> I didn\'t have good memories. Because, I was having a difficult situation.

Baby-sitting is hard work.

>> CORRERCT

(you\'re Welcome ^^ and thank you too! :D)

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