What are you excited about on your trip to China?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to eat chiness food. when I saw the Qingdao place through internet, the place view was very nice. because I enjoy to take a photo, so I will see the structure and many take a photo times. and I hope to go Qingdao beer museum. Beer is one of the my favorite alcohol. exactly, I must have taste a various of beer. This summer vacation, I\'m looking forward to it.
강사 첨삭
Hello Clara!
Thank you so much for making an effort to do a lot of compositions today! I think you did really well and your ideas were very interesting to read. Keep up the good work and see you later in class! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>I want to eat Chinese food.
2. when I saw the Qingdao place through internet, the place view was very nice.
>>When I saw pictures of the place called Qingdao on the internet, I thought the view was very nice.
3. because I enjoy to take a photo, so I will see the structure and many take a photo times.
>>Because I enjoy taking photos, I will look at the different structures and take many photos.
4. and I hope to go Qingdao beer museum. Beer is one of the my favorite alcohol.
>>I hope to go to Qingdao beer museum because beer is one of my favorite alcoholic drinks.
5. exactly, I must have taste a various of beer.
>>I must absolutely taste various kinds of beer.
6. This summer vacation, I\'m looking forward to it.
>>CORRECT!
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