What are you excited to do this weekend? Explain.
학생이 쓴 원문
I can do eating and playing repeatedly.
I can watch TV as soon as I wake up in the morning.
And I play games.
강사 첨삭
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What are you excited to do this weekend? Explain.
I can do eating and playing repeatedly.
>> I\'m excited to eat and play all weekend.
I can watch TV as soon as I wake up in the morning. And I play games.
>> I can watch TV as soon as I wake up in the morning and play games, too.
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