What are you going to do this weekend?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am planning to go to Daejeon with my boyfriend this weekend.
I will eat delicious food there, especially hot spring.
It is famous for its Yoo Seong hot springs.
And there is a bakery called Sungsimdang, which is the most famous bakery in Daejeon.
Here we will eat the most popular bread made from chives.
강사 첨삭
I am planning to go to Daejeon with my boyfriend this weekend.
>> CORRECT
I will eat delicious food there, especially hot spring.
>> I will eat delicious food there, and also enjoy the hot spring.
It is famous for its Yoo Seong hot springs.
>> CORRECT
And there is a bakery called Sungsimdang, which is the most famous bakery in Daejeon.
>> CORRECT
Here we will eat the most popular bread made from chives.
>> Here, we will eat the most popular bread made from chives.
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