What are you going to do tomorrow? / Why are you going to do that?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m going to participate in school online classes and go to math academics. Also, I\'m gonna precede middle 3-grade science. That\'s because I\'m not well at science and always a little hard at studying science. One more I\'m going to do tomorrow is an exercise that\'s why I eat too much being only home so I need to do exercise to prevent getting fatter.
강사 첨삭
Hi Risa,
Thank you for answering your homework.
]You\'re schedule is not so busy tomorrow and you still have time to exercise. That\'s a very good way to stay healthy and fit. Enjoy your day tomorrow and always keep your health. \"Health is wealth\". Have a good night..: ~ Teacher QUENNY...
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I\'m going to participate in school online classes and go to math academics.
>> I\'m going to participate in school online classes and go to math academics. (Correct)
Also, I\'m gonna precede middle 3-grade science.
>> Also, I\'m gonna precede middle 3-grade science. (Correct)
That\'s because I\'m not well at science and always a little hard at studying science.
>> That\'s because I\'m not well at science and always have a little difficulty studying science.
One more I\'m going to do tomorrow is an exercise that\'s why I eat too much being only home so I need to do exercise to prevent getting fatter.
>> One more I\'m going to do tomorrow is I will exercise that\'s why I eat too much. I\'m only alone at home so I need to do exercise to prevent getting fatter or gaining more weight.
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I\'m going to participate in school online classes and go to math academics. Also, I\'m gonna precede middle 3-grade science. That\'s because I\'m not well at science and always a little hard at studying science. One more I\'m going to do tomorrow is an exercise that\'s why I eat too much being only home so I need to do exercise to prevent getting fatter.
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