What are you looking for in your next job?

    Hello Ellen!

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~~Teacher Kate

1. I want to work at cosmetics company as like now if I move to other company.

>>I want to work for a cosmetics company similar to my present company.
2. I think the cosmetics is very difficult area and it needs enthusiastic character like an expert.

>>I think cosmetics is a vey difficult industry and it needs enthusiastic people, like experts.
3. Because it\'s applied on our skin directly, each of ingredients is important and we(cosmetics manufacturer or importer) should select ingredients carefully as well as import cosmetics from overseas.

>>Because it\'s applied directly on our skin, each of the ingredients is important and we as the cosmetics manufacturer or importer should select ingredients carefully and also choose the cosmetics we import from overseas.
4. What I have got known from my work is there\'re various cosmetics in the world.

>>What I learned from my work is that there\'re various cosmetics in the world.

5. it makes me feel interesting this field.

>>It makes me feel interested about this field.
6. Anyway, If I have an opportunity to work this area for the future, I\'ll not hesitate to join the company.

>>Anyway, If I\'m given an opportunity to work on this field in the future, I\'ll not hesitate to join the company.