What are you looking forward to in your future English classes?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to be friends with many people around this world.
And if I want to be, I need to learn English harder because English is one of the most popular languages in this world.
Grammar, Words are important too, but I think expression of English is more important to me.
Because of this reason, I think I need to learn more various kinds of expressions of English.
And I need to focus on other parts of English too.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I totally agree with you. Learning the different expressions in English can be a very helpful tool to communicate with other people. Anyway, you did really well with this composition! Keep up the good work!
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
And if I want to be, I need to learn English harder because English is one of the most popular languages in this world.
And if I want to be, I need to learn English harder because English is one of the most popular languages in this world.
>>CORRECT!
Grammar, Words are important too, but I think expression of English is more important to me.
Grammar, Words are important too, but I think expression of English is more important to me.
>>Grammar and words are important too, but I think English expressions are more important to me.
Because of this reason, I think I need to learn more various kinds of expressions of English.
Because of this reason, I think I need to learn more various kinds of expressions of English.
>>Because of this reason, I think I need to learn more various kinds of English expressions.
And I need to focus on other parts of English too.
And I need to focus on other parts of English too.
>>CORRECT!
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