What are you looking forward to most this coming holiday?

2022-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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In my opinion, this coming holiday will be a very special holiday. Because of Covid19 pandemic, me and my family were not able to meet our relatives. And we didn\'t meet our relatives for almost 3 years. Because of this, it will be the first time to meet my relatives during the pandemic. So, I think it will be very special holiday.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Great job today as usual! Keep it up! ^^
~~Teacher Kate 

In my opinion, this coming holiday will be a very special holiday.
>>CORRECT!
Because of Covid19 pandemic, me and my family were not able to meet our relatives.
>>CORRECT!
And we didn\'t meet our relatives for almost 3 years.
>>CORRECT!
Because of this, it will be the first time to meet my relatives during the pandemic.
>>CORRECT!
So, I think it will be very special holiday.
>>So, I think it will be a very special holiday.

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