What are you looking forward to the coming New Year?

2019-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Annie

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Hi~! it\'s happy happy Friday. i don\'t have to go work until tomorrow and everything is going well! This year almost finished and only a few days later. In next year, i\'m finally going to graduate and become adult. So, i\'m planning to prepare my driver\'s license, and drink beer with my friends like adults. After more years, when i\'ll be real adult, if i\'ll look back now, they\'re nothing specially meaningful, but i think it\'s the only things that i can feel at this time like a feeling of expectation or pounding in my mind. First, what the most i\'m looking forward to is short trip with my best friends in january. For this trip, i\'m working hardly these day to earn a lot money. but while i earned the money for my first time, i\'m also learning a lot things. From now on almost everthing will be awkward and first time, i think this work time will become good lesson anyway, I\'m little bit sad this year only a few days later but i wish everyone will be all right in next year! Thank you!

강사 첨삭


Hello Da [이름],

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work! 

-- I also wish you a wonderful weekend. Enjoy the remaining days of 2019. ^^

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)



What are you looking forward to the coming New Year?

Hi~! it\'s happy happy Friday. 
>>> Hi! It\'s a happy Friday. 

i don\'t have to go work until tomorrow and everything is going well!
>>> I don\'t have to go to work for today and tomorrow. Everything is doing well! 
[Note: Make sure to make the first letter of your sentence a big letter. ]

This year almost finished and only a few days later. 
>>> This year is almost finished, a few more days to go and we\'ll have a new year.

In next year, i\'m finally going to graduate and become adult.
>>> Next year, I\'m finally going to graduate and will become an adult.

So, i\'m planning to prepare my driver\'s license, and drink beer with my friends like adults.
>>> So, I\'m planning to apply for a driver\'s license and drink beer with my friends as adults do.

After more years, when i\'ll be real adult, if i\'ll look back now, they\'re nothing specially meaningful, but i think it\'s the only things that i can feel at this time like a feeling of expectation or pounding in my mind.
>>> After a few more years I\'ll become a real adult. 
The moment I look back with what happened now, everything will be not that special. 
But for now, I know I have a lot of expectations and plans running on my mind especially for the future.

First, what the most i\'m looking forward to is short trip with my best friends in january.
>>> First, I\'m really looking forward for my trip with my friends on January. 
Even if it\'s only a short trip but I\'m still excited about it.

For this trip, i\'m working hardly these day to earn a lot money. 
>>> In preparation for this trip, I am working to hard to earn a lot of money.

but while i earned the money for my first time, i\'m also learning a lot things. 
>>> While I\'m earning money for the first time, I\'m also learning a lot of things.

From now on almost everthing will be awkward and first time, i think this work time will become good lesson
>>> From now on, almost everything will be hard because it\'s my first time but I do believe that in the end, I\'ll learn good lessons.

anyway, I\'m little bit sad this year only a few days later but i wish everyone will be all right in next year! Thank you!
>>> Anyways, I\'m a bit sad for this year because there\'s only a few more days but I just wish everyone to be alright especially next year! Thank you!

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