What are you looking forward to the most this new year?
학생이 쓴 원문
Umm... I\'m looking forward to developing myself. In this year, I want to do my best to develop. But I know it is not easy..😭 And I want to make dreams come true. But I know It is not easy, too. But there are many great people around me. They have a good influence to me. I\'m not alone. In this year, clearly, I will face the problems. But like this essay, I\'m not alone...!!
강사 첨삭
Hi Kimberly:)
Yes, you are not alone. Cheers to being better versions of ourselves this new year! :)
Umm... I\'m looking forward to developing myself.
>> I am looking forward to developing myself.
In this year, I want to do my best to develop.
>> This year, I will do my best to make my self better.
But I know it is not easy..😭
>> Although, In know it won\'t be easy.
And I want to make dreams come true.
>> I also want to make my dreams come true.
But I know It is not easy, too.
>> Again, it won\'t be too easy.
But there are many great people around me.
>> Despite that, there are many great people around me.
They have a good influence to me.
>> They are good influences to me.
I\'m not alone.
>> CORRECT
In this year, clearly, I will face the problems.
>> CORRECT
But like this essay, I\'m not alone...!
>> But like what I said in this essay, I\'m not alone!
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