What are you looking forward to the most this new year?

2022-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I am looking forward my new class and classmates to the most this new year. I will have new friends and I think this new year will be the better year than the last year. I feel like that and so, I am excited about the new year. I will learn more advanced things and I will get much new knowledge. So I am excited about those things this new year.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]:) 

You\'re off to a good start! Those are great plans. :) 

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I am looking forward my new class and classmates to the most this new year.
>> I am looking forward to my new class and classmates the most this new year.

I will have new friends and I think this new year will be the better year than the last year.
>>I will have new friends and I think this new year will be the better year than last year.

I feel like that and so, I am excited about the new year.
>> I can feel it and makes me excited. 

I will learn more advanced things and I will get much new knowledge.
>> CORRECT

So I am excited about those things this new year.
>> CORRECT

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