What are you looking forward to this 2022 and why?

2022-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I look forward to improving my English skills in 2022 because I have to go to the United States next semester. In the next semester, I have to study in America for a year because of the school\'s rules. I hope to develop my English skills significantly so that I can communicate well in America.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]:)

Yes, we will work hard on that a lot. ^^

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I look forward to improving my English skills in 2022 because I have to go to the United States next semester.

>> CORRECT

In the next semester, I have to study in America for a year because of the school\'s rules.

>> CORRECT

I hope to develop my English skills significantly so that I can communicate well in America.

>> CORRECT

OR >>I hope to develop my English skills significantly so that I can communicate well in that country. (TRY TO AVOID REDUNDANCY)

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