What are you looking forward to this 2022 and why?

2022-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

In 2022, I become 3rd grade in middle school. This means that in 2023, I enter the high school. I don\'t want to believe this true. Anyway, to enter the high school, I should prepare many things. Also, I want to be a pride of the people around me. In other words, I hope that the people are proud of me. To make this hope come true, I should study hard. I will face many problems, but clearly, I will be able to experience new things. I\'m looking forward to these.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kimberly:)

Everyone is already proud of your achievements because you are a very smart and kind student. :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

In 2022, I become 3rd grade in middle school.

>> I will become a 3rd grade student in middle school this 2022.

This means that in 2023, I enter the high school.

>> This means that in 2023, I will enter high school.

I don\'t want to believe this true.

>> I don\'t want to believe that this true.

Anyway, to enter the high school, I should prepare many things.

>> Anyway, to enter high school, I should prepare many things.

Also, I want to be a pride of the people around me.

>> Also, I want to be the pride of the people around me.

In other words, I hope that the people are proud of me.

>> In other words, I hope that the people will be proud of me.

To make this hope come true, I should study hard.

>> To make this dream to come true, I should study hard.

I will face many problems, but clearly, I will be able to experience new things.

>> I will face many problems, but still, I will be able to experience new things.

I\'m looking forward to these.
>> CORRECT

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