What are you looking forward to this 2022 and why?

2022-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think I am looking forward my new friends and other things to this 2022 new year. I will meet new friends because the new year came, and I am looking forward my new friends to this 2022. I\'m not that excited about meeting new friends but I have a good feeling about this new year. So I am expecting my new friends, and also I am expecting my new studies. I will learn more advanced studies so I am a little excited about the studies. Also they are more advanced than before so I think I have to study harder than before. Those things are the things that I am looking forward to this 2022 new year. I want to make a lot of new friends and also I wish that COVID19 ends in this year.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]:)

Sounds like you guys are going to have a busy, yet fruitful year to come. I hope that all of your goals will be attained. :)

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I think I am looking forward my new friends and other things to this 2022 new year.

>> I think I am looking forward to meeting new friends and other things this 2022.

I will meet new friends because the new year came, and I am looking forward my new friends to this 2022.

>> I can meet new friends because it is a new year so there would be more possibilities.

I\'m not that excited about meeting new friends but I have a good feeling about this new year.

>> I\'m not that much excited about it but I still have a good feeling.

So I am expecting my new friends, and also I am expecting my new studies.

>> I also expect that I will learn a lot from my classes.

I will learn more advanced studies so I am a little excited about the studies.

>> I will learn more advance lessons so I am a little excited about it.

Also they are more advanced than before so I think I have to study harder than before.

>> Since they are more advance, I need to study more.

Those things are the things that I am looking forward to this 2022 new year.

>> Those are the things that I look forward to the most this new year; meeting new friends and the pandemic ending.

I want to make a lot of new friends and also I wish that COVID19 ends in this year.

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