What are you monst excited for about the future? why?
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It\'s too hard for me to answer.
If I think about subject, maybe it will be the first day of getting paid at stable company.
I\'ve been thinking about the first payday for a long time.
I had a lot of things I wanted to do, so I made a lot of plans regardless of the amount of money.
When I worked as a part-time job, I didn\'t receive a lot of money and couldn\'t implement my plans, so I want to practice the plans I\'ve made so far with my first salary at a stable job.
For example, doing a lot of installment savings and buying gifts to family and friends for their first salary.
Actually, in Korea, there is a tradition of giving parents\' long johns as a gift for their first salary, and when they receive their first salary, I want to give them as least pajamas, if not long johns.
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Hello, [이름]!
Before I had my first job and first paycheck, I had a lot of visions about treating the people I love with things they would enjoy. And now I can do it... Although it takes some time, buying desired items for both oneself and others can be a fulfilling experience. So I hope that one day you will be able to pursue your goal of treating others with your pay. At the same time, be prudent with your hard-earned money. ^^
-Chammy
It\'s too hard for me to answer.
>>Correct
If I think about subject, maybe it will be the first day of getting paid at stable company.
If I think about subject, maybe it will be the first day of getting paid at stable company.
>>If I think about a subject, maybe it will be the first day of getting paid at a stable company.
I\'ve been thinking about the first payday for a long time.
I had a lot of things I wanted to do, so I made a lot of plans regardless of the amount of money.
I had a lot of things I wanted to do, so I made a lot of plans regardless of the amount of money.
>>Correct
When I worked as a part-time job, I didn\'t receive a lot of money and couldn\'t implement my plans, so I want to practice the plans I\'ve made so far with my first salary at a stable job.
When I worked as a part-time job, I didn\'t receive a lot of money and couldn\'t implement my plans, so I want to practice the plans I\'ve made so far with my first salary at a stable job.
>>When I worked as a part-timer, I didn\'t receive a lot of money and couldn\'t implement my plans, so I want to practice the plans I\'ve made so far with my first salary at a stable job.
For example, doing a lot of installment savings and buying gifts to family and friends for their first salary.
>>For example, doing a lot of installment savings and buying gifts for family and friends from my first salary.
Actually, in Korea, there is a tradition of giving parents\' long johns as a gift for their first salary, and when they receive their first salary, I want to give them as least pajamas, if not long johns.
>>Actually, in Korea, there is a tradition of giving parents long johns as a gift on their first salary. And when I receive my first salary, I want to give them at least pajamas, if not long johns.
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