What are you most afraid of?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am most afraid of poverty. When I was a child, I were poorer than my friends. I have some bad memories about it. I couldn\'t bring things to prepare for the class. I should shared cloth with my siblings. My mom is diligent. She has been working very hard. She has overcome lots of problems. This memory give me motivation. When I get lazy, I remind it.
강사 첨삭
Good evening [이름]ny! :)
Thank you for writing an essay about this question and being honest with your answer. I admire it a lot since not everyone is comfortable enough to share about their fears.
I agree that poverty is quite scary. I\'m a victim of it too and I also experienced the same things that you\'ve mentioned here.
Anyhow, let\'s make our experiences a motivation to live a better life.
Thank you for writing an essay about this question and being honest with your answer. I admire it a lot since not everyone is comfortable enough to share about their fears.
I agree that poverty is quite scary. I\'m a victim of it too and I also experienced the same things that you\'ve mentioned here.
Anyhow, let\'s make our experiences a motivation to live a better life.
I hope you\'re doing great.
See you in class later.
~Teacher Charry
I am most afraid of poverty.
>> CORRECT!
When I was a child, I were poorer than my
friends.
>> When I was a child, I was poorer than my
friends.
I have some bad memories about it.
>> I had some bad memories about it.
I couldn\'t bring things to
prepare for the class.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: I couldn\'t bring the things that are needed in class.
I should shared cloth with my siblings.
>> I had to share clothes with my siblings.
My mom is
diligent.
>> CORRECT!
She has been working very hard.
>> CORRECT!
She has overcome lots of
problems.
>> CORRECT!
This memory give me motivation.
>> This memory gives me motivation.
When I get lazy, I remind it
>> When I get lazy, I remind myself of it.
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