What are you most afraid of? Why?(ANSWER)
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for answering this essay question and revealing what you\'re most afraid of.
I think sharp objects are indeed scary.
I am most afraid of high places.
I always get a feeling that I would fall whenever I am on a high place.
I hope you\'re doing great.
See you in next class. :)
~Teacher Charry
>> I\'m most afraid of a knife.
>> It\'s because it is very sharp and it can hurt a person.
>> Also, it is very dangerous and it can also be used as a weapon.
>> CORRECT!
>> Of course, there are some benefits in using a knife.
>> But when I see a knife, it\'s sharpness frightens me.
>> Also, knives are often found in many horror movies.
>> That\'s why a sword reminds me of a ghost.
>> The biggest reason why I\'m afraid of knives is because I or the one who uses the knife can get hurt.
>> So, I\'m most afraid of a knife.
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