What are you most afraid of? Why?(ANSWER)

2019-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for answering this essay question and revealing what you\'re most afraid of.

I think sharp objects are indeed scary.

I am most afraid of high places.

I always get a feeling that I would fall whenever I am on a high place.
I hope you\'re doing great.

See you in next class. :)
~Teacher Charry


>> I\'m most afraid of a knife.

>> It\'s because it is very sharp and it can hurt a person.

>> Also, it is very dangerous and it can also be used as a weapon.

>> CORRECT!

>> Of course, there are some benefits in using a knife.

>> But when I see a knife, it\'s sharpness frightens me.

>> Also, knives are often found in many horror movies.

>> That\'s why a sword reminds me of a ghost.

>> The biggest reason why I\'m afraid of knives is because I or the one who uses the knife can get hurt.

>> So, I\'m most afraid of a knife.

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