What are you most excited about for your upcoming trip?

2025-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jewel

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what I am looking forward to the most is Machu Picohu,Uyuni Desert and Patagonia Treaking. It is famouse to many people. I heard that traveling to South America can be healty and it require physical strength. I decided to go there even when I am a year younger.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ju Mi! These places sound great. I hope you can relax and recharge well on your upcoming vacation. ^^ Thank you for today\'s homework. Have a great dat as always!
T. Jewel
what I am looking forward to the most is Machu Picohu,Uyuni Desert and Patagonia Treaking.
>>What I am looking forward to the most is visiting Machu Picchu, exploring the Uyuni Desert, and trekking in Patagonia.
It is famouse to many people.
>>They are famous among many people.
I heard that traveling to South America can be healty and it require physical strength.
>>I heard that traveling to South America can be healthy and requires physical strength.
I decided to go there even when I am a year younger.
>>I decided to go there even when I was a year younger.

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