What are you most excited about when it comes to opening your new real estate business?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am looking forward to see new people,place and something else.
Maybe I have to work harder than former but I am warried a little.
\\\"can I do better?\\\" I think, I must always pursue money when I was young.
I don\\\'t know exactly , It\\\'s right or not?
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ju Mi! I know it would be a challenge to start something new, but I know you can do it. Just believe in yourself. ^^ Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Have a fun day!
~T. Jewel
I am looking forward to see new people,place and something else.
>>I am looking forward to seeing new people, places, and other things.
Maybe I have to work harder than former but I am warried a little.
>>Maybe I have to work harder than before, so I am a little worried.
\"can I do better?\" I think, I must always pursue money when I was young.
\"can I do better?\" I think, I must always pursue money when I was young.
>>I ask myself, \'Can I do better?\' I have always pursued money since I was young.
I don\'t know exactly , It\'s right or not?
>>I don\'t know exactly if it\'s right or not.
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