What are you most grateful for this Christmas and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am a Christian so the thing that is most greatgul for this Christmas is the birth of Jesus.
And also I am a Christian so I have to think about the sacrifice of Jesus.
But I think I am also thankful that I am living in this city with my family and friends.
So those are the things that I am most thankful for this Christmas.
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>> I am a Christian so I am most grateful for the birth of Jesus.
And also I am a Christian so I have to think about the sacrifice of Jesus.
>> I have to think about the sacrifices of Jesus.
But I think I am also thankful that I am living in this city with my family and friends.
>> But I am also thankful my family, friends ad the city that I live in.
So those are the things that I am most thankful for this Christmas.
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