What are you most proud about your country that you can never get or experience in other countries?
학생이 쓴 원문
The most thing that I feel proud of is a Cunfucian culture. Most people have thought respect for older people like giving their seats, asking for \"Could I help you?\" and giving them something. On the other hand, some adults take it for granted. Sometimes, I can fell hating that culture.
강사 첨삭
These sentences you\'ve created are very nice, Elic. I really get the message and idea which you are trying to convey here. You didn\'t forget to include correct punctuations and complete thoughts. Congratulations for doing a job-well done! Again, thank you and have a great day ahead!
- Teacher Raven
>> The thing that I feel most proud of is our Confucian culture.
Most people have thought respect for older people like giving their seats, asking for \"Could I help you?\" and giving them something.
>> Most people have respect for elders like giving their seats, offering their help, and giving them things.
On the other hand, some adults take it for granted.
>> Correct.
Sometimes, I can fell hating that culture.
>> Sometimes, I feel like I hate that culture.
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