What are you most proud of about your culture?
학생이 쓴 원문
>I would like to say the Korea food.
Even though I am [Name], Korea food is very delicious. Some food such as bulgogi, kimch, Korea dumpling, Korea ramen are so famous to foreign country but there are more a lot of delicious food in korea.
When I have other country’s food, I can feel and learn the country’s culture.
It makes me very interested.
Sometimes I am surprised after tasting some country’ food but I also can learn why the country’ people like that ingredient.
As long as I live in America, I want to try to eat all kind of world food.
Because there are a lot of foreigner and varied restaurants in America.
So I can go there as many as I want.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Miss [이름]!
I would like to say the Korea food.
>>> correct
Even though I am [Name], Korea food is very delicious.
Even though I am [Name], Korea food is very delicious.
>>> Even though I am [Name], Korean food is very delicious.
>>> OR: Because I am [Name], I find Korean food very delicious.
Some food such as bulgogi, kimch, Korea dumpling, Korea ramen are so famous to foreign country but there are more a lot of delicious food in korea.
>>> Some food such as bulgogi, kimch, Korea dumpling, Korea ramen are so famous to foreign countries but there are a lot more delicious food in Korea.
When I have other country’s food, I can feel and learn the country’s culture.
>>> correct
It makes me very interested.
It makes me very interested.
>>> correct
Sometimes I am surprised after tasting some country’ food but I also can learn why the country’ people like that ingredient.
Sometimes I am surprised after tasting some country’ food but I also can learn why the country’ people like that ingredient.
>>> correct
As long as I live in America, I want to try to eat all kind of world food.
As long as I live in America, I want to try to eat all kind of world food.
>>> As long as I live in America, I want to try to eat all kinds of food around the world.
Because there are a lot of foreigner and varied restaurants in America.
>>> correct
So I can go there as many as I want.
So I can go there as many as I want.
>>> OR: So I can go there as much as I want.
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