What are you most proud of in your working life?
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Hi Jeong Ah!
Thank you for sharing about your products and why you are proud of your work. I hope that I could taste the sea food you sell someday. kkk
Have a great day!
~Kelly^^
What I am most proud of in my working life is to show and explain fresh sea food.
>> What I am most proud of in my working life is that I can show and explain about fresh sea food to my customers.
There are some reasons why.
>> Correct.
The reason is that I have confidence in our goods.
>> Correct.
This is because we have never cheated where our sea food is from and stick it on the all of goods.
>> This is because we have never cheated our customers where we get our sea foods.
In addition they are really fresh.
>> Correct.
As a result, there are reaons why I am proud of in my working life.
>> These are the reasons why I am proud of in my working life.
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