What are you most worried about climate change?
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This is alarming, Sir [이름]!
Global warming, climate change and natural disasters are disastrous indicators that earth has been severely injured by all the industrializations happening on land. Let\'s help in healing the nature by being well-disciplined when it comes to disposing our waste. This is wonderful!
~Teacher Eunice
The global warming is a serious problem for the whole world.
>>> correct!
I have watched the documentary program on TV about global warming.
>>> correct!
It warned us that we might not be able to live in the earth if we wouldn\'t stop industrializing our world.
>>> It warned us that we might not be able to live on earth if we wouldn\'t stop industrializing our world.
We have felt the strange temperature since 20th century.
>>> We have felt the strange temperature in the 20th century.
It was extremely hot this summer and freezing last winter in Korea.
>>> It was extremely hot last summer and freezing last winter in Korea.
I think this is related with global warming.
>>> I think this is related to global warming.
So, What we have to do for preventing our world?
>>> So, what do we have to do for preventing global warming to harm our world drastically?
I figure that people must discard their mind that is \"there has to be no problem even if I only did a wrong action like disposing industrial waste, air and water without any purification and I believe that everyone will follow country\'s regulation.\"
>>> I figured out that people must discard their bad habit like thinking that \"there has to be no problem even if I only did wrong actions like disposing industrial waste through air and water without any purification.\"
>>> I believe that everyone will follow our country\'s regulation if we would impose strict policies with appropriate sanctions.
I don\'t want our children to live the dirty earth.
>>> I don\'t want our children to live on earth with severe pollution.
Everybody has to try preventing our world.
>>> Everybody has to try preventing our world from being damaged dreadfully.
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