What are you most worried about climate change?
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Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this. You\'re right about this. There is a big possibility it would happen if climate change continues to worsen in the future. Let\'s hope it would be better. To do that, we need to take action.
- T. Beth
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In the distant future climate change will be causes of new type of conflicts.
>>> In the distant future, climate change will be the cause of new types of conflicts.
>> OR: In the distant future, climate change will cause new types of conflicts.
Person who ares live in Island and coast will move that places to landwards.
>>> People who live in islands or the coast will move to the mainland.
If it do as I thought, some cities price will be much higher than what i expect.
>>> If that happens, cost of living in some cities will be much higher than what we expect.
The government will make some suggentions to solve similiar problems by investing a lot of labors and time.
>>> The government will make some suggetions to solve similiar problems by investing on a lot of labor and time.
In the process of solving problems, They are encountering some problems like a way to collect a lot of taxes.
>>> In the process of solving problems, they will be encountering some problems like a way to collect a lot of taxes.
Maybe Most people are worry about increasing taxes and refusing governments suggestions.
>>> Maybe most people will be worried about increasing taxes and refuse the government\'s suggestions.
Each countries are on same page about this problems.
>>> Each country is on the same page about this problem.
so by cooperating each contries, I want be a better earth.
>>> So by cooperating with each country, I want to the world to be better.
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