What are you mostly optimistic/pessimistic about?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'ve always been optimistic about that hard work always pays off in the end even though the time taken for it to come to fruition may vary. This belief has helped me to propel myself into my various goals.
In contrast, something that I am pessimistic about is maintaining close relationship with people for a long time. One of lessons that I learned from my experience is that it is usually not what we have done that makes the relationship drift away, it is just change in our situation that we\'re in that leads us to growing apart.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for your effort in answering your homework. Here are my corrections for you. :) I hope you will be an optimistic person even in the long run.
In contrast, something that I am pessimistic about is maintaining close relationship with people for a long time.
-Teacher Elise
I\'ve always been optimistic about that hard work always pays off in the end even though the time taken for it to come to fruition may vary.
>> I\'ve been always optimistic because I believe in the saying \" Hard work always pays off in the end\", even thought the time taken from it to come in to fruition may vary.
This belief has helped me to propel myself into my various goals.
>> CORRECT
In contrast, something that I am pessimistic about is maintaining close relationship with people for a long time.
>> CORRECT
One of lessons that I learned from my experience is that it is usually not what we have done that makes the relationship drift away, it is just change in our situation that we\'re in that leads us to growing apart.
>> One of the lessons I\'ve learned from my experience is that it not usually what we have done that makes the relationship drift away but it\'s because of the changers in the situation.
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